Archive for January, 2010

Nothing but the Truth…

Wednesday, January 27th, 2010

Am I obsessing? Once again I’m talking about that moment late in a story when battle weary heroes are forced into a ‘die or wake up’ situation. The waking up is called an ‘epiphany’. People are never the same after that. The protagonist is now equipped with the knowledge and power to bring the story to its conclusion.

Previously (”Fight for the right to see”, Dec, 7, 2009), I described this climax in terms of climbing a mountain, from which heights the hero is presented with a more expansive view of their world. They see more; they’re wiser now; outmoded principles can fall away. The lesson would appear to be that discovering ‘truth’ is a product of struggle. Better yet, all-consuming struggle.

Otherwise there’s no story worth telling. (This is what I’m obsessing about.)

Imagine if, in the opening scene of a movie, someone accosted the protagonist in the street and told them the truth. Instructed them clearly and forcibly. That should be the end of the story, right? Wrong. We don’t expect the hero to take anything on faith. If that happened, we’d groan. We’d demand our money back. Instinctively, we know that’s not how life’s most profound lessons are learned.

Truth told to us, however sincerely, and taken on faith, isn’t satisfying at all. Let’s see how this thesis plays out in Avatar.

Sully, the film’s hero, is dropped (literally) into a situation (Planet Pandora) where we just know he’s going to have a change of heart. Once a Marine, Sully is going to soften up, fall in love, and challenge authority. We know that. Yet we stick around for another two hours of film time to experience vicariously the painfully human process of breaking down old habits so that a new understanding can take root. We know it’s going to happen, but still, this is where we get our money’s worth. In the living through hell. As they say, ‘it’s easier to die than change.’

Sully’s ultimate transformation is total. The conventional wisdom pounded into him by his military training is abandoned. Coming from a world where ‘knowledge is power’ (and where power is synonymous with gain at the expense of others), Sully learns a more profound type of ‘knowing’. Pandoran knowledge empowers the person to understand where they fit in the cosmic scheme of things, a perspective from which all good things flow.

So, what’s my point? That the power of a story to nourish us depends on a struggle to uncover the truth. And that truth is always some kind of ‘knowing’. And, finally, that ever-expanding knowing (not knowledge) would appear to be our noble destiny.

Advantages of Adversity

Tuesday, January 19th, 2010

It’s almost a week now that I’ve been house-bound with a cold. There’s always an up-side to a downer, and so here’s my positive spin on my negative state of affairs. Stuck inside, I have more time to spend on my personal projects.

Even as a kid, I appreciated the ‘joy of being sick’. My passion was stamp collecting and building model houses out of balsa wood. I loved being sick! These days, it’s writing novels. This week, I’ve put the time to good use solving some story problems.

Consider the advantages of adversity, that’s the moral of this story (my blog story, I mean.)

For me, it’s been an advantage to be forced to sharpen my focus. Being ‘forced’ is key, because otherwise we humans have a powerful tendency to take the path of least resistance. Story characters are no different. If circumstances aren’t forcing the protagonist to fight for something, they won’t dig deep into their hidden selves. And whoever doesn’t dig, doesn’t discover who they really are.

As in life, so in art.

Consider this: the hero of a story doesn’t change through struggle. Rather, their character unfolds. It unfolds through adversity. (Same with you and me in real life.)

In the film Avatar (Best Picture, Golden Globe Awards!), Sully always had a greater understanding of human nature than was allowed him as a Marine. Through a heck of a lot of adversity, his higher nature began to show through.

But enough is enough! When am I going to get better?!

The Perfect Pitch

Monday, January 11th, 2010

Yesterday, I was honoured to be a panelist at a fund-raising event for the library in the historic neighbourhood of Olas Altas in Mazatlan, Mexico. We six authors spoke of our experiences getting published. I shared my enthusiasm for perfecting the all-important ‘pitch’. It’s ironic that after years of writing the many thousands of words that comprise the manuscript, selling it may come down to a dozen words. A ‘log-line’.

“Impossible.” “Won’t do it!”

I’ve heard writers react like this — because they don’t or can’t or won’t ‘get it’. The truth is, a) it’s extremely difficult to distill the essence (or heart or point) of your story into a line or two. And, b) if publishers and producers are buried in manuscripts, which they are, then we need to cut to the chase. And, c) writing the perfect pitch can help the writing process.

Let’s look at ‘c’. The heart of a story is like a treasure map on which X marks the spot. The point of a story is like the peak of a mountain – why did we climb it? The climax of a story is a bomb, one that goes off inside the protagonist. If we can’t explain our story in these terms, then maybe we don’t really know our own story. Practicing the pitch can help.

The perfect pitch is powerful, not only because it may sell the book, but because to know the story gives us power in the writing of it. Knowing exactly what we’re writing gives us the advantage of standing on a high hill, seeing everything. Having a perfect pitch is like being king of your story’s world.

Avatar and the Big Bang

Tuesday, January 5th, 2010

In the aftermath of seeing Avatar, and being rendered more or less speechless, I recalled two powerful images that the director chose to represent the opposing forces. One is the airborne seed of a holy tree (the ultimate in grace and sensitivity), and other is a transformer-like robot (the ultimate in brute force). Two more profoundly different icons would be hard to imagine. The story recounts the journey of the protagonist as he abandons one for the other.

Even if you haven’t seen Avatar, I’ll wager a large popcorn that you intuitively concluded which direction he went.

Grace, defiance of gravity, sensitivity, interconnectedness – these are the attributes of an expanded consciousness. Most heroes survive the story’s climax richer in these qualities. But it made me ask myself: why is a higher consciousness better? Why is it worth the trouble?

Here’s what I came up with:

Awareness is a precondition of freedom, insight, compassion… all the things no one can take away from you.  Not even if you’re  thrown into an Iranian prison guarded by a grizzled goon named Boor-boor. The nature of consciousness is expansiveness. You feel bigger because you feel connected to the cat, the couch, the corner store, in fact all of existence. By contrast, lack of objectivity leaves you the victim of your own puny mind-made reality. And not just puny but ever-shrinking.

It’s a question of expansion vs contraction. The human organizm isn’t separate from existence as a whole – we’re part of the Big Bang. Until the universe starts shrinking again, I guess going with the flow means expanding along for the ride.